a man nearly getting eaten

once there was a river called jordan and in jordan river there was a boat and in the boat there was a a man called john. John  had some water in the boat and some  food in the boat then he started fishing then he saw a man in another boat and he knew it was his brother called jordan like the river. Then john said jordan come and fish with me Okay I said back. Then we started fishing. The two men saw a crocodile and  john hit the crocodile with a big stick that was in the boat then the crocodile with sharp teeth was catching them. When the crocodile was catching them a big helicopter came to rescue john but the crocodile was still catching 
jordan but a boat saved him then they went home safe and they were happy and they started watching movies and were eating and drinking water.
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