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Tuesday, 16 August 2016

a man nearly getting eaten

once there was a river called jordan and in jordan river there was a boat and in the boat there was a a man called john. John  had some water in the boat and some  food in the boat then he started fishing then he saw a man in another boat and he knew it was his brother called jordan like the river. Then john said jordan come and fish with me Okay I said back. Then we started fishing. The two men saw a crocodile and  john hit the crocodile with a big stick that was in the boat then the crocodile with sharp teeth was catching them. When the crocodile was catching them a big helicopter came to rescue john but the crocodile was still catching 
jordan but a boat saved him then they went home safe and they were happy and they started watching movies and were eating and drinking water.
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Monday, 15 August 2016

oxygen is important for fire to survive

  i learnt that  when there is a fire we should put the oxygen on a table and then stop,drop and roll.

Sunday, 14 August 2016

learning shortcuts to use my netbook effciently

i learnt that control + tab is to change between tabs and that control + 9 shows you your most recent tab.

Monday, 8 August 2016

learning new ways of opening things

i learnt that there are shortcuts to open a new window and to open a