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Thursday 23 July 2020

😰Skydiving Narrative😰

After a long time we finally got to go skydiving,
 “Hurry I don’t wanna be late,” Dad bawled. 
“yesssssssss” 
“were finally going SKYDIVING! Sara squealed. 


When we got there the skydivers and the people that worked there told us
to put on the jumpsuit,helmet,goggles and we had to make sure that our shoes
wouldn’t come off and there was nothing in their pockets while we were falling.
Then after we put on our outfit they had to teach us about the safety training first
before doing the actual skydiving so we know what to do while falling. We had to
learn how to hold onto the parachute and how to control it.


“Okay Hurry get inside the plane” said mum, 
“Ugh this is too hot” James exaggerates
 “can I take it off for now then put it back on PLEASEEEEEE!!!  
“No it’s a part of skydiving so leave it alone” Mum said angrily
 “ugh fine” James said. 
“Why are we so high?” Amy said to Frightenley 
“That’s the point of skydiving we have to be in the sky,” said Dad. 
“okay Amy it’s our turn to go are you ready?”
“NOOOOOOO!!” Amy shouted
“Just go and stop being such a cry baby” James said in a Confident way
“Be quiet you weakling” Amy replied
“Okay come on let's go” Dad said in a rushing way
“Three Two One GO” The other skydiver said
“Okay sara now you have to go with the professional skydiver because I’m going with mum”
James said
“Yeah cause your a cry baby” Sara said hysterically
“Now let's go sara Three Two One Jump”
“AHHHHHHHHH” sara bellowed
“Mum lets go” James said in a rushingly way
“Okay Three Two One Jump” Mum replied
While they were going down sara and the tandem skydiver was going down during the free fall,
Sara was screaming and so when sara’s partner had to pull the drogue but when he pulled it
nothing happened so then he called for the plane to come and get him and Sara but the pilot
couldn’t her him.


When the skydiver was shouting for help Sara’s Dad heard and so he had to control the
parachute to go over and help the skydiver with the drogue. When Sara’s Dad went over to
help with the drogue he saw that it was stuck to the skydivers pants
“Quickly Dad pleaseeeee” Sara said in a petrifying way,
So Sara’s Dad quickly pulled the drogue away from the other guys pants then pulled it so the
parachute could come out, 
“Yessss you got it” Amy said in a delightful way.
“Come on Sara let's go down now” Said the skydiver
“Yeah let’s go” Sara replied
“Come on Sara you can do it” Mum said encouragingly 
“MUM!!!!” Sara shouted
“Come on Sara” Said James
“Ahhhhhhhh” Sara said in a painful way
“What happened Sara” Amy asked quickly
I landed on my feet instead of landing on my bottom and now my legs are hurting so bad.
“From 1-10 how bad is it” Dad asked 
“10” Sara replied
“IT HURTS REALLY BAD!!!!” Sara cried
“Okay here give me your leg”
Sara’s Dad grabbed her leg and started to move it around until it didn’t hurt anymore, Sara’s
leg was still hurting so some other skydivers helped her to exercise her leg, Finally her leg
only hurt a little but she was still able to walk.


They changed out of their outfits that they had to wear, Later they said goodbye to everyone
and thanked them for letting them skydive. Once they got into the car Sara said that she would
never go skydiving ever again.






6 comments:

  1. wow it the best thing i read but next time use headings

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  2. What An awesome story you have completed your goal to use hard words Well done

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  3. this is very good but need details when they were in the car

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  4. this is very good hope i like the way that you have added some dialogue and some detail to your story.But next time add more hard words to your story but at least your story was really good hope. Keep it up the good work tht you are doing hope.

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  5. I achieved my goal by using hard words

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    1. My next goal is to use more detail

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