WALT: use speech in our writing.
On Saturday the 6th of october I felt excited because my family,myself,my little siblings and their Rugby league team went to an amazing place could Rainbows end and I also felt worried that I couldn’t go on any rides
On Saturday the 6th of october I felt excited because my family,myself,my little siblings and their Rugby league team went to an amazing place could Rainbows end and I also felt worried that I couldn’t go on any rides
Firstly, My parents paid for the family so we could go on the rides! we had to choose what ride to go on. In fact we went on the huge blue Invader and I felt really excited to go on the Invader. When it was our turn to go on the Invader I heard a lot of people were screaming like “AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH” and the ride was AMAZING! ! !
Then the second ride we went on was the less extreme stratosfear now this ride was different to the extreme stratosfear. In fact the less extreme one is the one that just goes side to side. The extreme on is the one that goes around and upside down, "I hope I don't throw up". In addition the less extreme
stratosfear was awesome. . .
Finally the last rides I went on was the log flume and the family karts both of the rides were brilliant and the log flume was took very long to finish.
In conclusion we went home and we all were tired from going on the rides it was a long day.
kia ora Hope. I'm Daniel, a year 6 student from Wainui Beach School. This is an excellent post about Rainbows End! I like how your post Had very good structure. It had a interesting title, an intro, 3 main paragraphs and a conclusion. Recently I went to Dreamworld in Aussie. It's like a really big version of Rainbows End. My favorite ride at Dreamworld was the Giant Drop (like the Fear Fall). It is the biggest free fall ride in the world. It was extremely scary,but it was totally worth it. If you want to check out my post about me in aussie, type this in your https search bar. https://wbsdanielp.blogspot.com Then you can scroll down and look for it.
ReplyDeleteExcellent post Hope. I look forward to more posts from you. From Daniel.
Hi Hope,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Nellie from Moana Learning Hub at WBS in Gisborne. I really liked your writing about your trip to Rainbows End, I have never been to rainbows end but I have been to Wet'n'Wild and Movie World in Australia. I would have liked a little more info but overall great post.
From Nellie
Hi Hope,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Sarah and I go to WBS in Gisborne NZ.
I really like your story, I want to know more about it. Was Rainbow's End fun? I really want to go there. How did you persuade your parents? Next time you could add more info because I really want to know more about your post.
From Sarah