I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teachers are Mr Janse and Ms Schellingerhout.
Friday 16 September 2016
walking
"Kids go walk to school now" "OK we yelled from the lounge so first they packed their stuff.Then they went to school next dad said it's a beautiful sunny day to go work. Later as the girls were on there way to school they got lost and didn't know where to go.After that dad was finished work then he went to get the girls at school but they weren't there so he started to walk home then he saw his kids.Finally they got home and were eating with their mum and then they were playing outside
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