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Thursday 22 September 2016

beautiful day

once there were three people and there names were Jack,John and Frank and they made high-ropes in the treetops so Jack tried it out but something made a crank noise.


That noise was the rang it was cracking then he was falling but a bouncy thing was there and John said "are you ok" so they went down and helped him by.


 Pulling him up nicely and they took him to the doctors then they went home in bed because he wasn't feeling so well then he went to sleep and he was dreaming some nice and good things in his head.



1 comment:

  1. Hope.L,I love how you used interesting words and powerful words,I love how you described the picture keep it up Kai Pai!!

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