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Monday 19 September 2016

nice day

once there was two people and a dog. The two people was a girl and a boy the girl's name is ana and the boy's name is john "WOW it's a beautiful day to run outside" said ana and john said lets go run in the woods. Then they were at the woods and 

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  1. Hi Hope, what a great story! You have clearly introduced the characters and the setting, then what the problem was and then what the solution was. Great structure!
    Come and see me and I can show you how to fix up your blog post (putting the whole story on instead of that little box)
    Keep it up! :)

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