I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teachers are Mr Janse and Ms Schellingerhout.
Hi Hope I liked learning about the Tongan culture :D.... Maybe next time try to use capital letters for I and your name and make sure to use punctuation. But well done Hope. -EDITH
Hi Hope, I really like your culture presentation it is so interesting but I think that you could make it more interesting by adding more details and more intersting facts about your culture because when you add detail to your work it makes it look good but I like the way you have put in the pictures it is very neat.
Hi Hope L I like the way you described tonga and what tongan girls and boys wear but can you describe more about the country and what they like to eat.
Hi Hope, I think that your work was interesting but I think that you should try to read your work through and to take out your last name but your work was really amazing.
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ReplyDeleteHi Hope I liked learning about the Tongan culture :D....
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time try to use capital letters for I and your name and make sure to use punctuation.
But well done Hope.
-EDITH
Hi Hope,
ReplyDeleteI really like your culture presentation it is so interesting but I think that you could make it more interesting by adding more details and more intersting facts about your culture because when you add detail to your work it makes it look good but I like the way you have put in the pictures it is very neat.
Hi Hope L
ReplyDeleteI like the way you described tonga and what tongan
girls and boys wear but can you describe more about
the country and what they like to eat.
Hi Hope,
ReplyDeleteI think that your work was interesting but I think that you should try to read your work through and to take out your last name but your work was really amazing.
Hi Hope,great work keep it up it is so amazing
ReplyDeleteTaonga