I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teachers are Mr Janse and Ms Schellingerhout.
I was scared when it was my first time at school and I was scared when I was playing rugby with my family and i was scared because i might get bumped off and fall down and get hurt.
Hi Hope L, good start. Remember your writing goal is to add more detail to your writing. For this blog post, you could add how you felt. For example, I felt afraid, I felt lonely, I felt like I had goosebumps on my arms. Miss Ashley
Hi Hope L, good start. Remember your writing goal is to add more detail to your writing. For this blog post, you could add how you felt. For example, I felt afraid, I felt lonely, I felt like I had goosebumps on my arms.
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